Frostbite

Name: "Frostbite"

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Alliance: Sentou Gakuin

Age: 18

Homeland: No one is exactly sure where Frostbite is from. The main reason for this is becasue the Ice Ninjas are very secretive about there villages location. They normally kill anyone who tries to leave the village. Frostbite is the first person who made it out alive. However, he refuses to tell anyone about the exact location of the village. Many people have guessed that wherever he lived, it was extremely cold there. Due to the tribal markings on his head, it is still land where Ice Ninja's derive from. Although the exact location is not known, it is thought to be close to the Antartic Ocean, surrounded by trechurous mountains and have terrible ice storms several times a day.

Appearance: Frostbite stands at 5'5''. His skin is pale white, due to the fact that his skin lost its pigment since it is so cold where he lives. His hair is blue, and could pass for being icicles. Most of the clothes he wears have something resembling ice on them. He wears a white scarf over his mouth, to protect him from the cold. He wears an ice armlet on his right arm, and carries many ninja weapons, as well as a sword that can turn into ice.

Ranking: Elite

Personality:
Frostbite does not like company all that much. He has gotten so use to just himself as his company that anyone else makes him uncomfortable. many of the people that he did know from his village have tried to kill him, which does not help his socialism at all. The few things that he likes is a cold bath, the snow, and playing practical jokes. He does not take listening to peole very well. He likes to follow his own way instead of listening to someone telling him how to do anything. Frostbite can be extremely rebellious at times. That is one of the main reasons he left his village in the first place. When he gives someone a certain look, he can tell almost everything about a person. One of the few good benefits for his social inaptness.

Type of Warrior:
-May pick three: Ninja, swordsman, alchemist

Elemental Affinity:
-May pick two. Ice, water

History/Character's Background Story: No one knows all that much information about Frostbite. All of the information that is known about him is classifyed information. He was born in the Village Hidden in the Snow, a very brutal village. At the age of 2, he was required by their law to be given the tribes tatoo. At age 6, he joined the villages training facilities, and quikly became a ninja in training. Their graduation test was very difficult to pass. Each contender had to live in the wilderness for a year, and that was only part of it. They also had to face a elite ninja in battle and kill him/her to graduate. Frostbite gained the title of having passed the exam the fastest, only taking him a few minutes to kill the elite ninja. He rose quickly through the ranks of ninja until he was an elite ninja himself at age 10. When he did reach the rank of elite, he was given a sword by the Aisukage (leader) of the village that could instantly turn to ice. Frostbite thanked the Aisukage by running him through the heart with the blade. He had to run for his life. He barely got out of the village alive. Frostbite began to treck across the country, looking for a place to settle. He was forever on the look out for Ice ninjas, for his village now wished him dead. He climbed through freezing mountains and ice-covered water. He once fell in, and nearly drowned to death. A seal saved his life. However, he was in the water long enough to have lost all of the pigment in his skin. He was now white as the snow that surrounded him. He found hiding from the Ice ninja's much easier than it was before. He no longer feared for his life. He actually began to retaliate against them, setting up ambushes. Soon, the Ice ninjas that were looking for him gave up in order to keep their population from dying. Frostbite continued on his journey. He finally reached a school one winters day, by the name of Sentou Gakuin. HE had never heard of the school before, but he wanted to see if he could be accepted here as a student.

RPing Sample: The wind seemed like it was blowing sideways as Frostbite slowly made his way in the blizzard. He was glad that he was born in this type of weather condition, or else he would have died by now. The wind howled as it drone ice-snow into his face; needles that continue to puncture the skin repeatedly. Frostbite continued walking. He had tried making the ice into water, to make the pathway a bit easier, but all that got him was a detour around 2ft think of ice. A kunia suddenly shot toward his neck from behind. His reflexes served him well; he quickly did a backflip, catching the kunia with his hand. While still in the air, he threw the kunia back toward the direction he believed it had came at him. A thud and a groan greeted him, letting him know that it had found its target: another Ice Ninja, trying to hunt him down. Frostbite scanned the area, knowing that more were around. He did not care that they were there; if they gave away their position, they were good as dead. He just continued on his way through waist-deep snow, trying to find a place where they would not follow him anymore. A new place in which he could call home. Frostbite did not exactly care how long it would take him to reach the place; he only knew that it was out there waiting for him, calling his name. This is the place where you belong.

Finally finished. Sorry it took so long

Cool avatar for Frostbite

You forgot to put if he was main or support.

Well, hes a main by himself, if that what you mean

-For Homeland, I want more detail than the whole 'no one knows where he's from'. Too many people use that to shorten their character's homeland. Even if Frostbite doesn't remember where he's from, you should still write it

-Personality isn't long enough

-If you're going to use terms from Naruti like Fire Shadow, Genin, etc. you'll need to explain all of them so that we know what they are. In the Naruto world its obvious, but in the Sentou Gakuin world you must inform us.

Wouldn't it be easier to just use the english equivillents anyway?

Also, if you are stuck thinking of somewhere to come from, My main is an Ice demon. It'd make sense for them to come from somewhere similar. You could come from the bottom of the mountain where Sara is from, or round there. If you are stuck on somewhere to come from.

Just trying to help ^__^

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-You still didn't describe the homeland itself. You just put in more information about why many don't know about it. I want information about what it looks like, weather conditions, or even where it is located from the location of Sentou Gakuin.

-The history is better but maybe you should just take out genin, jounin, and Hokage and put in: ninja-in-training, elite ninja, and fire shadow-the leader of the village.


Just a bit of info you probably knew, Hokage was only in Konoha. In the other villages there was the Mizukage(Water Shadow), Raikage(Lightning Shadow), Kazekage(Wind Shadow), and the Tsuchikage(Earth Shadow). This is just in case you want to make a different kage since a fire shadow might not fit too well in an ice village. Ice in japanese is Aisu.

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You still left Jonin in the history, and it is spelled Jounin.

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purpleregiment7 wrote:Frostbite thanked the Hokage by running him through the heart with the blade.

You still have Hokage after your first Aisukage. Just wanted to let you know.

fixed

The RP Sample isn't long enough. And you still have 'Jounin' in the history.

edited....again

is it OK now???

Looks good to me...

purpleregiment7 wrote:Name: "Frostbite"

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Alliance: Sentou Gakuin

Age: 18

Homeland:
No one is exactly sure where Frostbite is from. The main reason for
this is becasue the Ice Ninjas are very secretive about there villages
location. They normally kill anyone who tries to leave the village.
Frostbite is the first person who made it out alive. However, he
refuses to tell anyone about the exact location of the village. Many
people have guessed that wherever he lived, it was extremely cold
there. Due to the tribal markings on his head, it is still land where
Ice Ninja's derive from. Although the exact location is not known, it
is thought to be close to the Antartic Ocean, surrounded by trechurous
mountains and have terrible ice storms several times a day.

Appearance:
Frostbite stands at 5'5''. His skin is pale white, due to the fact that
his skin lost its pigment since it is so cold where he lives. His hair
is blue, and could pass for being icicles. Most of the clothes he wears
have something resembling ice on them. He wears a white scarf over his
mouth, to protect him from the cold. He wears an ice armlet on his
right arm, and carries many ninja weapons, as well as a sword that can
turn into ice.

Ranking: Elite

Personality:
Frostbite
does not like company all that much. He has gotten so use to just
himself as his company that anyone else makes him uncomfortable. many
of the people that he did know from his village have tried to kill him,
which does not help his socialism at all. The few things that he likes
is a cold bath, the snow, and playing practical jokes. He does not take
listening to peole very well. He likes to follow his own way instead of
listening to someone telling him how to do anything. Frostbite can be
extremely rebellious at times. That is one of the main reasons he left
his village in the first place. When he gives someone a certain look,
he can tell almost everything about a person. One of the few good
benefits for his social inaptness.

Type of Warrior:
-May pick three: Ninja, swordsman, alchemist

Elemental Affinity:
-May pick two. Ice, water

History/Character's Background Story: No
one knows all that much information about Frostbite. All of the
information that is known about him is classifyed information. He was
born in the Village Hidden in the Snow, a very brutal village. At the
age of 2, he was required by their law to be given the tribes tatoo. At
age 6, he joined the villages training facilities, and quikly became a
ninja in training. Their graduation test was very difficult to pass.
Each contender had to live in the wilderness for a year, and that was
only part of it. They also had to face a elite ninja in battle and kill
him/her to graduate. Frostbite gained the title of having passed the
exam the fastest, only taking him a few minutes to kill the elite
ninja. He rose quickly through the ranks of ninja until he was an elite
ninja himself at age 10. When he did reach the rank of elite, he was
given a sword by the Aisukage (leader) of the village that could
instantly turn to ice. Frostbite thanked the Aisukage by running him
through the heart with the blade. He had to run for his life. He barely
got out of the village alive. Frostbite began to treck across the
country, looking for a place to settle. He was forever on the look out
for Ice ninjas, for his village now wished him dead. He climbed through
freezing mountains and ice-covered water. He once fell in, and nearly
drowned to death. A seal saved his life. However, he was in the water
long enough to have lost all of the pigment in his skin. He was now
white as the snow that surrounded him. He found hiding from the Ice
ninja's much easier than it was before. He no longer feared for his
life. He actually began to retaliate against them, setting up ambushes.
Soon, the Ice ninjas that were looking for him gave up in order to keep
their population from dying. Frostbite continued on his journey. He
finally reached a school one winters day, by the name of Sentou Gakuin.
HE had never heard of the school before, but he wanted to see if he
could be accepted here as a student.

RPing Sample:
The wind seemed like it was blowing sideways as Frostbite slowly made
his way in the blizzard. He was glad that he was born in this type of
weather condition, or else he would have died by now. The wind howled
as it drone ice-snow into his face; needles that continue to puncture
the skin repeatedly. Frostbite continued walking. He had tried making
the ice into water, to make the pathway a bit easier, but all that got
him was a detour around 2ft think of ice. A kunia suddenly shot toward
his neck from behind. His reflexes served him well; he quickly did a
backflip, catching the kunia with his hand. While still in the air, he
threw the kunia back toward the direction he believed it had came at
him. A thud and a groan greeted him, letting him know that it had found
its target: another Ice Ninja, trying to hunt him down. Frostbite
scanned the area, knowing that more were around. He did not care that
they were there; if they gave away their position, they were good as
dead. He just continued on his way through waist-deep snow, trying to
find a place where they would not follow him anymore. A new place in
which he could call home. Frostbite did not exactly care how long it
would take him to reach the place; he only knew that it was out there
waiting for him, calling his name. This is the place where you belong.

...I approve

WEEEHOOOO!!!!!!!!

Now to your techniques and weapons