Homura The Flame Jester Puppet[complete]

Name: Homura

Appearance:

Homura looks more like a human being than a puppet, but Kraii did this on purpose in order to disguise it from others. She took great care and detail into forming a puppet that was very similar to a human while removing key details that make a human, human. The clothes itself are based on a flame theme and pattern, since Kraii uses the element of fire. She has replaced the areas that would naturally be white with red marking and left the black areas as they were. Some stripes are located around Homura's body simply because she prefers them. The jester appearance was chosen since she had a slight liking for clowns and events like that. The jester look also was chosen because she enjoyed how clowns could scare some people without any intention of doing so. The clothes of the puppet are baggy, but this is only to hide the true weapons within it. The body of the puppet, hidden by the flame patterned clothing, has small holes within it that allow Homura to use flame attacks. Some items were also placed within Homura by Kraii as well in order to enhance its fighting capabilities. Small slots are located on the body of Homura, allowing it to detatch its body parts under Kraii's control

Abilities:





Fire Jet is the name of Homura's most used ability. Being a puppet that is used with fire, it is made from a type of material that absorbs and reconfigures flames to enhance and boost its own power. Fire Jet allows any techniques that use the flame element to be slightly faster in battle, increasing its dice amount by 1. This requires no dice to use but is automatically in effect from the start of battle.



Flamethrower is a self-explanatory technique. From Homura's hands are a large hole that is only seen when this technique is about to be used. From the hole is a small elemental channel that connects to Kraii and channels her Fire element to Homura's. When being used, a burst of flames come rushing from the hole, aiming in the general direction of where Homura's hands are being pointed. The flames aren't as intense as normal, but they still pack a punch.



Cooling Release, an ability of Homura used a means of protecting her from dangerous attacks. When an elemental attack is used against her or Homura, it will open its mouth wide and reveal a tiny disc within its mouth. It also holds its arms and legs wide open in front of her. As the attack makes contact, Homura re-directs the attack to the mouth and dispels it as a cool flame and some steam. Because of the material used on Homura to create it, it doesn't get destroyed by common elements although after a while, it can possibly become disabled (when Kraii is unable to use dice).



Spiked Rocket Launcher is Homura's final attack that he performs alone (essentially). He limbs detatch from his body and his hands form a fist while his feet are aimed with the spikes on its shoes facing at the enemy. Massive and powerful flames are emitted from large holes behind the limbs and cause the limbs to be launched at the opponent. A technique like this is used is dire circumstances when Kraii needs to pummel through an opponent's defenses or hit a usually fast target. This is so because this technique cannot be evaded or defended with a simple defense dice.



Homura Marionette is the basis of Homura's control. Kraii will usually emit her fingers in flames on both hands and touch the back of Homura with both hands simultaneously. This will allow Homura to be controlled by Kraii as a normal puppet although the "wires" are invisible and untouchable since it is controlled directly from her hands. Of course, the flames themselves can be put out, but Kraii takes extra care into making sure they aren't put out.




Attack Power:

• Flamethrower: 60
  
• Spiked Rocket Launcher: 75
  

Dice usage:

• Fire Jet: N/A
  
• Flamethrower: Attack Dice
  
• Cooling Release: Defense Dice
  
• Spiked Rocket Launcher: Special Dice
  
• Homura Marionette: N/A
  

Benefits:

• Fire Jet: N/A
  
• Flamethrower: N/A
  
• Cooling Release: N/A
  
• Spiked Rocket Launcher: Offensive
  
• Homura Marionette: N/A
  

History: Homura was created by Kraii during the many hours she spent alone. His idea came from the clowns that Homura did enjoy. Some of the parts to create Homura came from the forbidden lands around her home. The reason for her making a puppet was that she enjoyed puppets more than being a common spellcaster and her mastery with the puppets, she hopes, will prove to her parents that she is on an equal level with her older brother. Homura is more or less, a prototype of sorts as she plans on making more puppets with different abilities. Although it is a prototype, it is successful and not merely an experiment. Homura is fully functional and capable of being used to its full extent.

Finally finished. I like this puppet a lot and I hope the mods enjoy it too.

--clown smiley for a clown weapon--

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Fire Jet is the name of Homura's most used ability. Being a puppet that is used with fire, it is made from a type of material that absorbs and reconfigures flames to enhance and boost its own power. Fire Jet allows any techniques that use the flame element to be slightly faster in battle, increasing its dice amount by 1. This requires no dice to use but is automatically in effect from the start of battle.
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Flamethrower is a self-explanatory technique. From Homura's hands are a large hole that is only seen when this technique is about to be used. From the hole is a small elemental channel that connects to Kraii and channels
her Fire element to Homura's. When being used, a burst of flames come
rushing from the hole, aiming in the general direction of where Homura's hands are being pointed. The flames aren't as intense as normal, but they still pack a punch.
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Cooling Release, an ability of Homura used a means of protecting her from
dangerous attacks. When an elemental attack is used against her or Homura, it will open its mouth wide and reveal a tiny disc within its mouth. It also holds its arms and legs wide open in front of her. As the attack makes contact, Homura re-directs the attack to the mouth and dispels it as a cool flame and some steam. Because of the material used on Homura to create it, it doesn't get destroyed by common elements although after a while, it can possibly become disabled (when Kraii is unable to use dice).
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Spiked Rocket Launcher is Homura's final attack that he performs alone (essentially). He limbs detatch from his body and his hands form a fist while his feet are aimed with the spikes on its shoes facing at the enemy. Massive and powerful flames are emitted from large holes behind the limbs and cause the limbs to be launched at the opponent. A technique like this is used is dire circumstances when Kraii needs to pummel through an opponent's defenses or hit a usually fast target. This is so because this technique cannot be evaded or defended with a simple defense dice.
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Homura Marionette is the basis of Homura's control. Kraii will usually emit her fingers in flames on both hands and touch the back of Homura with both hands simultaneously. This will allow Homura to be controlled by Kraii as a normal puppet although the "wires" are invisible and untouchable since it is controlled directly from her hands. Of course, the flames themselves can be put out, but Kraii takes extra care into making sure they aren't put out.
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It got kind of messed up when I copied and pasted.

By five lines, they mean what you see after you hit send. (I.e. what everybody else sees when they look at this topic, not what you see when you edit or write a post.)

I know that. That is what I see when I hit send. I see more than 5 lines.

I approve. I also see at least 5 lines for each now that the picture is smaller