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Dharc Rokujou

Post by Zura on December 22nd 2008, 2:48 pm

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Name: Dharc Rokujou
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Race: Human
Alliance: Sentou Gaukin

Homeland: Dharc was born in a large city levitating in the sky called Endymion, which was a city filled with all sorts of powerful spellcasters. In the city, there are twelve elemental spirits that look over each town and for each spirit there is a tall tower where they watch from. The people in the city are separated in towns depending on which element they are dominant in, but there is a certain town meant for the people who were born without magic. Each town had a name to match it inhabitants. The town of fire is known as Ignia. The town of water, Aquis. The town of light, Lumina. The town of wind, Venta. The town of earth, Solum. The town of ice, Glacies. The town of thunder, Tonitrus. The town of darkness, Tenebras. Dharc was born in a family with fire as their dominant element so they lived in Ignia. In Ignia, most of the people have pretty short tempers causing multiple fights to occur each day which results with the water spellcasters from Aquis having to come over to put out their fires. The people who were dominant in more than one element were considered freaks in the city so they were isolated in a disgusting place filled with crimes and gang violence, but a horrible incident recently happened in the city that mainly involved the people in that area so powerful sages put a strong barrier around the perimenter of the area so their actions would no longer affect the main part of the city.

Physical Description[Appearance]:
Dharc standing is about 5 feet tall. Dharc is pretty short for his age and pretty scrawny due to his lack nutrition when he was growing up. Dharc has messy purple hair that almost covers his eyes. Dharc's red, slightly ripped up overcoat was blessed by the elemental spirit of fire, Efreet, meaning that the overcoat has a strong resistance to fire and it can absorb mana and convert the mana into flames that would emit from the coat but the flames would not burn Dharc at all. Inside of his overcoat, Dharc wears a black suit that is fairly easy and comfortable to move in.

Ranking: Yellow

Personality: When Dharc was a child, he was very timid and was always picked on by the other kids in the area he lived in and whenever a kid stole something from a nearby store they would always use Dharc as their scapegoat and leave him to be beaten by the adults. It is because of this, that Dharc barely trusts anyone around him anymore. Even though his life was completely unfair when he was a child, Dharc has a strong sense of justice and punish anyone who has done wrong with the power that was given to him by the elemental spirit of fire, Efreet.

Warrior Class: Spellcaster, Gunner
-Sub-Class: Sage, Blaster

Elemental Affinity: Fire

History/Background Story: When Dharc was growing up, he had to take multiple part time jobs to support his family since his father died early in Dharc's life, and his mother was in poor health. Dharc had a hard time making friends since he was too busy working all the time and since his family was also poor, the other kids didn't want to associate with him. One day, the kids decided to play a cruel joke on Dharc. One of the kids stole a bunch of valuables from a man who had a really short temper and blamed the thievery on Dharc. When the man caught Dharc, the man beat Dharc senselessly and then casted a circle of fire around Dharc, expecting Dharc to die. As Dharc laid there wounded being slowly burned by the fire around him, Dharc desperately wanted justice to be served and have those kids who picked on him punished instead of him. Right before Dharc was completely engulfed in the flames, a boy and a couple other men from Aquis came and put out the fire around the area where Dharc was and arrested the man who beat up Dharc. After the fire was cleaned up and the man was put into custody for using his fire magic to hurt the innocent, the boy from Aquis when over to Dharc and said "You're going to be alright, the medics from Aquis are going to take care of you." When Dharc awoke, he was in the hospital, and the boy who he had seen back then was right next to him. The boy introduced himself as Shinsen Mizuki and he told Dharc that he was with the fire fighters of Aquis because he dreamed of being a person defended the justice of this city and wanted to get used to the experience of being in a serious situation. Dharc told Shinsen that he didn't have any friends and that he is always picked on by others. Shinsen response to this by saying that the kids only pick on Dharc cause he is always by himself, so Shinsen offers to become Dharc's friend and Dharc accepts. Elsewhere in the town where the non-magic users lived, several gangs in there began to complain how the magic users look down on them just because they were unable to use magic, in the middle of their conversations a shadowy figure appeared before them and told them that he could supply them with a power greater than the magic that the spellcasters of the city use. After hearing this, the non-magic users were astonished and desperately wanted this power that the man was talking about. The man then pulled out a piece of paper with strange symbols on it and told the people that if they wanted the power he was talking about they would have to put a small drop of their blood on the paper and almost all of the non magic users did as he told. After that the man put the piece of paper away and then started to chant a strange spell and then after a moment of chanting, the man smiled and said "Let's begin this bloodbath." While this was happening, Shinsen was starting to do his job, patrolling the city and contact the authorities if he saw any events of extreme violence, and Dharc decided to tag along with Shinsen. In the middle of patrolling, Shinsen decided to stop by the tower of water to pay his respects to Undine, the elemental spirit of water that watches over Aquis and then he asked Dharc if he wanted to pay his respects to Efreet the elemental spirit of fire that watches over Ignia. Dharc didn't really want to pay his respects to the elemental spirit that was suppose to watch over his town because of the poor lifestyle he was living, but since Shinsen had asked, Dharc decided to walk Shinsen over to the tower of fire. Whne the two of them arrived at the tower, Shinsen was amazing by the inside of the tower saying how much different it was compared to the tower of water. After the two of them left the tower, they heard a huge explosion in the direction of Aquis. After they had heard the explosion, Shinsen told Dharc to stay where he was, until Shinsen came back with the reason behind the explosion. Dharc did as Shinsen said and waited only to see the tower of fire be destroy nearby. Dharc ran over to the debris and saw disfigured creatures surrounding the area. Whne the creatures spotted Dharc, they attempted to attack him, but Dharc attempted to fend them off of with his fire magic. When Dharc's fire magic hit one of the creatures, the creature fell to the ground but immediately regenerated and continued its attack on Dharc. Dharc constantly threw fireballs at the creatures at an attempt to drive them away but the creatures kept on regenerating and getting closer to Dharc. When one of the creatures was about the strike Dharc, Dharc kept on shouting out, "I don't want to die!" Just then a large being surrounded by massive flames appeared before Dharc and incinerated the creatures. Dharc stared at the being in front of him and asked who the being was. The being turned its head around and replied "I am Efreet, the elemental spirit of fire that watches over this town and controls the flow of the mana of fire. Human, what is your name?" Dharc told Efreet his name and Efreet replied "Dharc, allow me to inhabit your body so I may obliterate the creatures that threaten the peace of this town." Dharc stared at Efreet with a confused look on his face and Efreet resumed talking and said "Do not worry, this does not mean that I will be completely possessing you. We elemental spirits cannot draw mana directly from nature like you humans can because we require a massive amount of mana in order to exist on this world and if we were to absorb mana from nature, we would suck this world dry of its mana. That is why we had the humans build towers that would slowly gathering mana from every human within the tower's vicinity so we may collect mana from the humans rather than nature. So Dharc what is your answer?" Dharc stared at the ground for a moment thinking of what would happen if he would let Efreet inhabit his body. After thinking for awhile, Dharc looked up to Efreet and agreed. Efreet then turned into a ball of fire and then went into Dharc's body. More and more creatures came towards where Dharc and Efreet were and when they arrived, Dharc was wearing a red cloak and was wielding a gun with strange markings on the side of it. When Dharc noticed the creatures, he aimed his new gun at them and shot. A bullet surrounded by an intense flame came out of the gun and completely incinerated all of the creatures within the bullet's range. Efreet said in Dharc's mind "This is only a small percentage of my total power, as you use this power more and more, your power may adapt to become as powerful as mine." Dharc not longer felt fear and set off to rid the town of the creatures that had attacked him, and after that he would leave town and live on his own. Unfortunately, Dharc had not seen Shinsen at all before the left.


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Re: Dharc Rokujou

Post by Hei on December 22nd 2008, 6:36 pm

If it's not original this time, it's not being approved. Razz
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Re: Dharc Rokujou

Post by Dagomis on December 22nd 2008, 7:52 pm

I believe it to be original, but maybe we should run it by Stew first.
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Re: Dharc Rokujou

Post by Hei on December 23rd 2008, 11:12 am

I doubt it's originality, considering who it is who made it.
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Re: Dharc Rokujou

Post by Dagomis on December 23rd 2008, 8:57 pm

Ok. We get your point, so now it is enough. Stop before this becomes another topic spammed. No more comments from you unless they speak of only approval or denial.
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Re: Dharc Rokujou

Post by Jisenki on December 27th 2008, 8:15 pm

You are allowed to make characters from various anime and manga. Denial of a character shouldn't be based solely on what character they choose to make, but it should be based on the quality of the character and how well the person can fit the character into the Sentou Gakuin plot.

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Re: Dharc Rokujou

Post by Hei on December 27th 2008, 8:53 pm

Party pooper. Course you'd take his side. No
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Re: Dharc Rokujou

Post by Jisenki on December 27th 2008, 9:30 pm

I'm siding with everyone who has or will, in the future, use characters from an anime or manga.

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Re: Dharc Rokujou

Post by Zura on January 28th 2009, 9:40 pm

Okay, I am finally done and ready to have my character checked by someone.

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Re: Dharc Rokujou

Post by Dagomis on January 28th 2009, 10:39 pm

Approved. Great job, LMNOG. Cool
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